Book Feedback 3

Hey Room 14! Comment on this book if you have time( include any ideas for a title)
https://docs.google.com/document/d/16OJQ3phNxDbcMiBUadMtu8EbecTPJPiSe3OVCB9gReg/edit?hl=en#

The final Wekkly Riddle

These riddles will give you directions to the New Riddle. Go to this persons blog

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1b0DHVdIk6A_IKzMEIivzxXPZfWlpCSIsvEnrvZIWmEI/edit?authkey=CKGn_oIL#

good luck!!!!!!!!!!

The Hunger Games

The Hunger Games, by Suzanne Collins, is part of a trilogy of the same name that takes a look at a world that may not be to far away, where the deepest fears are real, and even the purest heroes are tainted. It tells about Panem, a country built from the ruins of North America. A shining capitol surounded by twelve districts. And then there are the Hunger Games, a competion where a boy and a girl between 12 and 18 from each district fight eachother to death. On live TV. Enter Katniss Everdenn, a 16 year old girl who took her sisters place in the games. Unfourtanetly for her , the other tribute is Peeta Melark, a boy who she owes a debt to. And in the arena, where only one can win and 23 must die, debts are dangerous.

Egypt xtranormal

Hey Room 14!!!!!!!! Here's my xtranormal on Ancient Egypt. I used Stars because it kinda hard to take walking teddy bears seriously.
http://www.xtranormal.com/watch/7896651/

The Westing Game

The Westing Game, by Ellen Raskin, is a 217 page mystery, with plot twists from beggining to end. Sam Westing, multimillionare, has recently died, and has named 16 completely unlike people his heirs. At the reading of the will however, Westing claims that his life was taken, by one of the heir. And then the Westing Gamebegins. The heirs raceto find the murder and win the millions of dollars, but is everything what it seems? Every heir has a secret, and a diffrent set of clues. But only you know them all. So, do you dare play the Westing Game?

Xtranormal

Hey Room 14!! The question of hotdogs sudendly came , so I made a video. here it is http://www.xtranormal.com/watch/7793177/

Book Feedback

Hey Room 14!!! I'm writing a book and I want your feedback. It doesn't have a title, and it's only the first chapter. It's fantasy, and blends futuristic( laser beam security, airships), mideval( swords and armor) and modern ( guns). It involves seven dragons being controlled by seven pieces of armor. It tells of a girl who steals a piece of armor, becomes a dragon rider, and attempts to overthrow the evil tyrant ruling the land. I want your feedback on what I can do to improve it, titles or addons to the story. https://docs.google.com/document/d/16OJQ3phNxDbcMiBUadMtu8EbecTPJPiSe3OVCB9gReg/edit#

P.S. I have not added fillers, so this is bare bone. The final will be longer.

The Lord of the Rings: The Fellowship of the Ring

Three Rings for Elven-Kings under the sky

Seven for the Dwarf-lords in their halls of stone

Nine for mortal men doomed to die

One for the dark Lord on his dark Throne

The Lord of the Rings: The Fellowship of the Ring, byJ.R.R. Tolkien, is a 458 page adventure telling of another place called Middle-Earth. It concerms The Fellowship of the Ring ( composed of 4 hobbits, 3 men, 1 dwarf, and 1 elf) as they attempt to destroy the One Ring( a ring with the power to destroy the world) so Sauron( the Supreme Evil) cannot have it. The main character is Frodo Baggins, a hobbit( short,rrotund timid people), and is backed by Sam, Pipin, Mary( also hobbits) Aragorn( a ranger), Gandalf ( a wizard) and Boromir( all men), Legolas( an elf), and Gimli( a dwarf). Will they suceed? Who will live? Who will die? Read this to find out?

Harry Potter and the Order of the Pheonix

Harry Potter and the Order of the Pheonix, by J.K.Rowling, is a 870 page fantasy story of love adventure, and magic. The story takes place in Harry's 5th year at Hogwarts, and the wizarding world is in an uproar. After Harry's claims that Voldemort( The supreme antagonist) has returned, the Ministry of Magic refuse to belive him and to silence his claims. They've installed in Hogwarts a teacher with a personality like poisoned honey. On the other hand,Harry is seeing into Voldemort's mind in his dreams and is always trying to reach a door at the end of a corridor. Who will live, Who will die, Who will fall in love and who will have there hearts broken. Rea this to find out

Camp

Camp was great!!!!! The classes were interesting , free time was neat, and the food was good. My only complaint was that by the end of the week, I had cabin fever, along with the rest of my cabin. Cabin fever is when your just sick (and Madrone cabin, I mean no offense) of seeing the same people over and over again. Otherwise it was awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

For my Mn project, I did a poem. Please comment once done

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Bz2XiiqRW0iT5XuQ_owuW_7YIWu1HGgoVIBZtRLWJ5Q/edit?authkey=CNrJpowE#

The Amber Spyglass

In the 392 page finale of the The His Dark Materials Series,The Amber Spyglass, the story is brought to an explosive conclusion. The story of Lyra, Will, Lord Asriel, Mrs.Coulter, and "the Temptress" are brought to a end. After a escaping from a drug induced sleep, Lyra recieves a vision to go to the world of the dead with Will. Lord Asriel convinces Mrs. Coulter to join his cause. The "Teptress" works to save a world of people from extinction. And the Authoritys(read: God) great secret is revealed.Who will live ? Who will die? Will the Authority end? Will there ever be the Republic of Heaven? Read this book to find out! P.s. Read if you are not extremely religous!

The Subtle Knife

Lyra and Will, two children, get caught in the crossfire of a war against Heaven in The Subtle Knife, a 343 page book by Philp Pullman. 2nd in the His Dark Materials series, It tells the story of how Will and Lyra came thrugh a portal that transported them to Cittagazze, a world where adults are always in fear of semi- death. For the first half of the book, they try to trust eachother. For the rest of the book, the focus is on the Subtle Knife, a knife that could cut through anything or, cut through dimensions. Pullman creates a book with great charcaters, death, and a cliffhanger ending. Read this if you are not extremly religous!

My Song

My song is http://listen.grooveshark.com/#/playlist/Upside+Down/35424870 , or "Upside Down", by Jack Johnson. It reminds me that thinking inside the box is unnecessary. Also
, it reminds me to always be creative and to awalys see things differently.

Post #1 - The Golden Compass

The 296 page epic, The Golden Compass,Part of the His Dark Materials series by Phillip Pullman,takes place in an alternate reality. The main problem is that hero Lyra sets off to rescue kidnapped children. She achieves this goal by helping the children escape from the Arctic Circle. The main character, Lyra, is a multi-faceted heroine.

Lyra, the story's heroine, is very multi-faceted. She is equal parts adventrous and brave and cautios and cunning. When, early in the book, she convinces the Gyptians to take her to the Arctic Circle. When she convinces Iorek Byrnison to join her cause. And, at the end, when she convinces the king of armored bears to duel Iorek Byrnison over her. In all these encounters, she treads on dangerous ground, and her multi-facetedness gets her through. I highly recomend this book, UNLESS you are extremely religous.