Sunday, February 6, 2011

book feedback

here is a link to my book please give me a title and any ideas to improve it here
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3 comments:

  1. AnonymousFebruary 9, 2011 at 6:25 PM

    Great story line wouldn't change a thing

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  2. Andrew (KCK)February 10, 2011 at 6:34 PM

    perfect, but cooma in 2nd sentence

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  3. Tanner GormanFebruary 11, 2011 at 9:06 PM

    Absolutely Wonderful☺! She's grown quite a bit since I last saw her! However, you stated the legend twice.

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